Comments on: Project 1: Near Final Draft Link

By: AUSTIN

AUSTIN — Sun, 15 Oct 2017 04:00:05 +0000

Your site looks pretty awesome and I love all the smaller things you include like how you include a link to actually play tetris is really cool and makes your site seem like a regular website and not a project. If I could suggest one thing, I would include more pictures throughout the entire site and not just in one place. Also, embedding a youtube video of the game play you’re referencing would help the viewer/reader of the website.
Good luck on the rest of your project!

By: JAMES

JAMES — Sun, 15 Oct 2017 02:24:17 +0000

Hey! I really liked you’re site, I thought that it looked gorgeous. It was very easy to navigate for the most part, although it looks like you had a video or two scattered throughout and that wasn’t showing up easily for me for whatever reason. You’re analysis seemed pretty solid, although I think that the application page could do with some expansion (ie, relating more with how those games deal with your topic).

All in all, though, your website is great so far! Good work!

By: EVAN

EVAN — Sun, 15 Oct 2017 01:18:08 +0000

Yeooo

Your site is so fucking polished, it’s crazy impressive. I honestly kind of envy it, because it definitely seems like you know how to use WordPress really well. You even have drop-down menus, and everything within those is so well compartmentalized. It all runs really smoothly and presents itself as such — the whole thing is just super cool. I’m gonna try to pull off the same features on my site if I can figure it out in time after writing the rest. I also like your premise a lot too, everything you’re arguing is unique and important for sure. One bit of advice I have for you is to change the color of the text on your drop-down menus if that’s possible, because it’s really hard to see the lettering (gray on gray).

By: ELLIOTT

ELLIOTT — Sat, 14 Oct 2017 03:01:32 +0000

Hey, Hayley! Your site is looking really solid. I know that we’ve all only posted drafts, but yours is coming along well. I’m interested to see how you analyze DDR in regards to literacy. I remember you saying in class how it promotes a type of physical literacy, but I don’t remember all the details. Your application of Huizinga for Tetris was very well done, too. Keep up the good work!