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Comments on: Draft (Intro Paragraphs)
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Sun, 08 Oct 2017 18:45:31 +0000https://rhetoricofgaming.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyWriting/?p=382#comment-7Austin, I really enjoyed reading your intro paragraphs. I really like how you emphasized remembering your first gaming experiences. The first couple sentences do a great job of reeling your audience in. At the end of the first paragraph, it clearly states what you will be talking about in the rest of your project – that you have learned many skills and gained good qualities from gaming experiences. Your second paragraph starts to build on that idea, with using specific examples of games. This is a great start and I’m sure you’ll be able to find a lot of research on this topic!
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